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Ozivi

Journal Entry: Sun Jul 20, 2008, 7:48 AM
  • Mood: Optimism
  • Listening to: Guns 'n Roses - Welcome to the Jungle.
  • Watching: My screen

Edit1: Change of names, history of characters, new enemy bio included. Pics coming soon.


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Ozivi
I’ve been thinking a while about drawing a manga. My drawing skills suck though, but this way my skills will surely improve.

Main Characters


Oburu (M, 14 years old)

Oburu, the protagonist in the story is just a thief. Homeless, stealing food from the market dealers in order to survive. He steals with his friends. Kundum is his best friend, and together with 2 other he steals to survive. He is brave, has a good fighting technique.

Kundum (M, 13 years old)

Kundum is the fun guy in the group. Luaghing all the time, he tends to annoy people with that. He sounds silly, but that makes him underestimated.

Anue (F, 13 years old)

Anue secretly has a crush on Oburu, and she's very naïve. Her favourite word is idiot, which she uses all the time to adress Kundum.


Akbao (M, 15 years old)

Originally came from Arabia, but fled to other cities when his parents comitted suicide. Is depressive most of the time, has a trauma and sits alone. Very silent, but his fighting skills are better than anyone else when someone insults him or his parents.


Ikero (M, 63 years old)

Oburu’s uncle seems to be hiding things and himself from various people. He has debts to pay off, and is in trouble all the time. He tries to get higher up, but as it looks now he will only go down. Down to the sea, where the bodies lie, and where you don't wanna be..


Xaïl (M, ??? Years old)

Xaïl is said to be dangerous. This heavy smoker is brilliant in leading, but prefers to be alone. He is one of the four "Seated Smokers", as the civilians call them. They are the leaders of the street. If something happens, they know it first. They're responsible for every crime in the city, except for those who don't want to work with them. Examples of those people are Oburu and his friends. But they say people who don't work with the Seated Smokers, don't have a very long life span.


Plot

Oburu, Kundum, Anue and Akbao are a bond of close friends. They live on the streets, searching for food and steal for a living. Ikero has a market stall, which gets crushed all the time by various thiefs, including Oburu and his friends. Oburu and Ibero don’t know they’re family, and it wouldn’t matter even if they knew. Oburu has to steal in order to survive. Xaïl approaches Oburu later on. Oburu refuses, which causes problems. And who the hell are the people from Organization Untitled?



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And what the hell does Ozivi mean?

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Devious Information

  • Current Residence: Holland
  • Favourite genre of music: House, Pop, Rap.
  • Operating System: Windows XP
  • Favourite game: GTA IV
  • Favourite gaming platform: Playstation 3
  • Tools of the Trade: Insipiration

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~Manon-92:iconManon-92: Jun 18, 2008, 10:14:46 AM
:)
Geen dank! :D

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~Bruun-o:iconBruun-o: Jun 18, 2008, 10:09:22 AM
Bedankt! :iconohjoyplz:

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~Manon-92:iconManon-92: Jun 17, 2008, 6:57:13 AM
Mooie gallery! :)

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~Guttergoo:iconGuttergoo: Jun 10, 2008, 3:36:54 PM
Thanks a bunch. :3

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:heart: and :peace:~!

I'll have something cool here again..someday. Maybe.
~onutzaC:icononutzaC: Jun 6, 2008, 10:24:15 AM
thanks for the :+fav::kiss:

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~Ibilicious:iconIbilicious: Jun 2, 2008, 8:46:57 AM
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*1ALPHA1:icon1ALPHA1: Jun 1, 2008, 2:24:08 PM
thnx4thewatch:)

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~Adriaan-DeJongh:iconAdriaan-DeJongh: Jun 1, 2008, 1:45:46 PM
Hey dude, hanks for the fave on my wallpaper 'tree of time' !

Cya around! Nice gallery, btw ;)

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=DEVlANT:iconDEVlANT: Jun 1, 2008, 1:15:15 AM
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~thehonor2:iconthehonor2: May 30, 2008, 4:31:01 PM
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~sdrullfra:iconsdrullfra: May 24, 2008, 11:40:36 AM
Thank you :heart:

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~NieuweNaam:iconNieuweNaam: May 23, 2008, 9:38:37 AM
Heel erg bedankt voor de fave en de watch :D

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=Tamilia:iconTamilia: May 21, 2008, 3:48:29 PM
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sorry for my bad english ^^;
~Bruun-o:iconBruun-o: May 20, 2008, 7:42:23 AM
Thank you very much :nod:

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~Bruun-o:iconBruun-o: May 14, 2008, 7:57:25 AM
Thank you :D

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~IxI-95:iconIxI-95: May 14, 2008, 3:25:01 AM
Great gallery ;D
=trygothic:icontrygothic: May 12, 2008, 3:17:30 PM
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~MoonGale:iconMoonGale: Apr 28, 2008, 6:41:21 PM
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